Why make a thread about your thread being closed lol just get over it and eat a cookie or something
Why make a thread about your thread being closed lol just get over it and eat a cookie or something
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xD Thanks.
Grammar was always my strong point. IDK, but its always come naturally. Never could tell which "plural" form of "it" to use though. I think that "its" is actually the possessive and "it's" is the contraction of "it is". Can never remember which is which though.
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I just poked in to say this thread is hilarious... poor DWill...
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You wanted reasons for my corrections? Here you go OP.
Ok, so first you said "This is AND outrage." And is wrong because it is a conjunction. A conjunction links two sentences, or parts of a sentence, together to form a complete or more complete thought.
I believe that a "!" would have been more appropriate to end that exclamation rather than a "." because that phrase is usually said when quite angry. It is also usually said quite loudly, thus I changed the "." to a "!".
"Haha" should be separated to "Ha ha". The former is not a word.
"Not" was spelled incorrectly as "Nit" If you were talking about the action that elderly women usually partake in, then that would be spelled "Knit".
"its" has been replaced with "the thread is". Why? What is "its"? I believe that "its" would be a pronoun here renaming the subject of "thread", had the subject been present in the first place. Because the actual subject is never named, it can be assumed that the reader will not know what "its" is, so "the thread" would be required here to let the reader know what the sentence is talking about.
Wrong form of "there". Should be the possessive form "their".
Comma is optional. I prefer it for smoother reading.
Missing pronoun. "they" should be present because it renames the subject and starts a particular type of phrase. I can't for the life of me remember what the technical name is for that phrase is though. Its been about five years. Bear with me. xD
"mad" is incorrect word usage. Mad refers to a psychological state of mind. "Upset" or "angry" would be correct terms.
Missing word. "them" is appropriate.
Again, the possessive form of "there" should be used here.
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Then please correct me on what I've mistaken (Aside my my own typos). It is 1:30am here on the east coast, and I have been up since 5am Est, so I don't doubt that I've mixed up a few things. xD
EDIT: Grammar has also changed a bit since I took it in high school, so I don't doubt that some of what I said no longer applies or has been changed.
I'm old school like that.![]()
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