no no, everything was fine. Its just.... maybe a little much.
The OP isn't even on this thread anymore
no no, everything was fine. Its just.... maybe a little much.
The OP isn't even on this thread anymore
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Will Shatner school of punctuation, thank you.Originally Posted by DWill
Their you go. Or They're. Or There. Take your pick, I assume that will make it easier.
Much? He did say that he would like me to explain my corrections, and I did make quite a few, so I explained them.
Each and every one of them...
Y'all whine too much.
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OP. You're still here?
I just came here to quote this.
tl;drYou wanted reasons for my corrections? Here you go OP.
Ok, so first you said "This is AND outrage." And is wrong because it is a conjunction. A conjunction links two sentences, or parts of a sentence, together to form a complete or more complete thought.
I believe that a "!" would have been more appropriate to end that exclamation rather than a "." because that phrase is usually said when quite angry. It is also usually said quite loudly, thus I changed the "." to a "!".
"Haha" should be separated to "Ha ha". The former is not a word.
"Not" was spelled incorrectly as "Nit" If you were talking about the action that elderly women usually partake in, then that would be spelled "Knit".
"its" has been replaced with "the thread is". Why? What is "its"? I believe that "its" would be a pronoun here renaming the subject of "thread", had the subject been present in the first place. Because the actual subject is never named, it can be assumed that the reader will not know what "its" is, so "the thread" would be required here to let the reader know what the sentence is talking about.
Wrong form of "there". Should be the possessive form "their".
Comma is optional. I prefer it for smoother reading.
Missing pronoun. "they" should be present because it renames the subject and starts a particular type of phrase. I can't for the life of me remember what the technical name is for that phrase is though. Its been about five years. Bear with me. xD
"mad" is incorrect word usage. Mad refers to a psychological state of mind. "Upset" or "angry" would be correct terms.
Missing word. "them" is appropriate.
Again, the possessive form of "there" should be used here.
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I hope they clean up this attacking each other kiddie bs.
Ok first its not text speak I thought grammar was your strong point. And 2nd like you have never replied with shortened words while texting or something else. If you say no your a ******* leir.xD Thanks.
Grammar was always my strong point. IDK, but its always come naturally. Never could tell which "plural" form of "it" to use though. I think that "its" is actually the possessive and "it's" is the contraction of "it is". Can never remember which is which though.
Says the man that replies with text speak.
I agree with Agent T8235 you were starting to get ahead a little but I guess your what us normal people would call a geek or a person who is smart but gets between the legs of no females. Or a homosexual which ever u choose to be.:-)You wanted reasons for my corrections? Here you go OP.
Ok, so first you said "This is AND outrage." And is wrong because it is a conjunction. A conjunction links two sentences, or parts of a sentence, together to form a complete or more complete thought.
I believe that a "!" would have been more appropriate to end that exclamation rather than a "." because that phrase is usually said when quite angry. It is also usually said quite loudly, thus I changed the "." to a "!".
"Haha" should be separated to "Ha ha". The former is not a word.
"Not" was spelled incorrectly as "Nit" If you were talking about the action that elderly women usually partake in, then that would be spelled "Knit".
"its" has been replaced with "the thread is". Why? What is "its"? I believe that "its" would be a pronoun here renaming the subject of "thread", had the subject been present in the first place. Because the actual subject is never named, it can be assumed that the reader will not know what "its" is, so "the thread" would be required here to let the reader know what the sentence is talking about.
Wrong form of "there". Should be the possessive form "their".
Comma is optional. I prefer it for smoother reading.
Missing pronoun. "they" should be present because it renames the subject and starts a particular type of phrase. I can't for the life of me remember what the technical name is for that phrase is though. Its been about five years. Bear with me. xD
"mad" is incorrect word usage. Mad refers to a psychological state of mind. "Upset" or "angry" would be correct terms.
Missing word. "them" is appropriate.
Again, the possessive form of "there" should be used here.
Instead if those periods you need commas. There incomplete sentences, and you need jesus it seems because school has failed you.
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