Song I made.

[OIO]

It's beautiful. I really enjoy listening to it had a nice lucid feel about the song. I think you are doing a great job.
I have played around with Techno Ejay and the other Ejay's and really enjoy doing that, never nothing sound even close to par to this.
my hope for you is that you continue and share more.

[VolDeVie]

Thank you very much OIO. It has become an ever-growing passion. I'm very much an introvert, and music is the only real way I can express the way I feel and get things off my chest. It's a sense of peace when I'm creating that I never knew before. Point being, I'll never stop even if the world tells me to quit. When I first started friends put on a fake smile and told me it was great, but you can always tell when a close friend is lying. If that didn't stop me I can't imagine anything that can.

[Cl Chaos]

So, I've been making music for about 6 months or so now, and finally starting to feel comfortable with making them more public. Anyways, I just finished up a track today and would love some constructive criticism on it. I've got a pretty small friend group and it's hard to get a real critique out of most of them. It's kind of a dark-ambient feel to it, don't really know what genre to call it.

EDIT: NEW LINK, Thank you all for the feedback so far. It's been a huge help. The previous version will still be on my page if you'd like to hear the difference. https://soundcloud.com/michaelpechac...gers-world-v-2

Edit #3: I was worried there was a bit of clipping that I wasn't catching. Found some other speakers to play it over and it was a bit more prominent. The running version I have in FL Studio is no longer clipping. I'm going to wait to see if there are any more changes I make from criticism in this thread and real life before uploading another updated version seeing as how I JUST re-posted it -_- (Irate with myself on that one.). Thanks again everyone for taking time to listen.

PS: "You suck give up" <-- Anything of this nature I'm reporting. Forewarning for the trolls, proceed with caution.
"Not a fan of it" <-- Entirely acceptable.

when i read the name of this thread i thought it was Clown lol