Music I Made - Feedback wanted

[VolDeVie]

So, about a month or so ago I posted a song that I had been working on and I got some great feedback from the peeps on here. I'm actually still working on that song I had posted earlier... Can't quite get it to sound exactly how I want. Anyways, I did a quick little side project that I really enjoy and thought I'd share it. It's rather simple, it's just a loop. So, here's me sharing it for some constructive criticism.

https://soundcloud.com/michaelpechacek/lucidity-loop

PS: It has no ending as it's supposed to endlessly loop. My goal with my music is to work with Indie game developers or something of the like. With that being said, loops are a necessity and I do not plan on turning this in to a full song.

[Umbra Warrior]

It reminds me almost of something out of Final Fantasy. It's really cool ambiance. You should poke around ModDB, since I'm sure there's alot of modders and indie devs looking for a composer. You probably won't get paid, but at least it's good experience.

[Hope499]

It reminds me almost of something out of Final Fantasy. It's really cool ambiance. .

*Runs off to go listen

[hey u]

So, about a month or so ago I posted a song that I had been working on and I got some great feedback from the peeps on here. I'm actually still working on that song I had posted earlier... Can't quite get it to sound exactly how I want. Anyways, I did a quick little side project that I really enjoy and thought I'd share it. It's rather simple, it's just a loop. So, here's me sharing it for some constructive criticism.

https://soundcloud.com/michaelpechacek/lucidity-loop

PS: It has no ending as it's supposed to endlessly loop. My goal with my music is to work with Indie game developers or something of the like. With that being said, loops are a necessity and I do not plan on turning this in to a full song.

This would sound nice on say a game when u pause your game. Ha even better if this was used in fable 3 loading screen because id just never get old or sick of hearing this. Then after I beat the game id just chill up on pause mode now and then to listen to the song melody yez sir!....!? LOVE THIS

[VolDeVie]

@Umbra, I've been looking for a site that would be a good start, thanks much for the info!

@Hey u, I was thinking almost like a start screen or menu option. Thanks for the compliment as well ^_^

[hey u]

Hey have u played I MAED A GAM3 W1TH ZOMBIES 1N IT!!! A game like this put your song or type of song/idea into a game like this 1. I MAED A GAM3 W1TH ZOMBIES 1N IT!!!

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=6LO9Cl5IlLk

heck would even work in dead pixels

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=_oEo7K6LO84

games like this? If u make something like this or along the lines of this well id pay ya for it so... could see in a game o ya

Or is this more of what your looking for masters of belial

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=kF6JV9qPJpA

minus the speaking in the songs. Beats like this? I love these so well made songs

[VolDeVie]

Honestly it's hard to say what type of game I'll be composing for once I get my demos all completed. Personally, I'd love to see my music featured in a rogue-like. Something like Binding of Isaac but a bit less evil.

[hey u]

I don't know if u dig this type of music maybe for a game u have this 1 may work but id say tune down the voice a bit mononoke theme

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=4j9fp7rnfX0 for a specific type of game

If u have any more load them lets hear them

[VolDeVie]

"u have this 1 may work but id say tune down the voice a bit mononoke theme" I'm confused what you mean by this? Are you asking if I've composed a similar piece? Or saying I should? *scratches head*

https://soundcloud.com/michaelpechacek should have all my completed + half completed songs (Moody + A Stranger's World + Bit are still being worked on. The others are... not getting any more love from me). The ones lower to the bottom are from when I first started composing (about half a year ago). I've improved dramatically since and my style has changed quite a lot from when I was still getting basics down. Feel free to give em a listen, though don't expect much.

[hey u]

I thought u want more musical solos no words more so? More instruments or less? but looking up atm